Fan-made Level for sonic hacks Discussion

looks plain....makes me want to punch babies.

 

Don't mind Hez, he's always like that. :P

There's not much to base an opinion off, although here's a few pointers;
- The ramp doesn't go into the ground entirely, which might be a bit of a problem in-game.
- The platform's edges would probably look better if they were more curved instead of like stairs.

 

That is already how Sonic games work. Before you draw level art, you should learn how the games work. This way you can make better levels by knowing the limitations of the game.

You should also study the art made by Sonic Team, learn the techinqes that they used. Make sure not to be lazy at all, otherwise a good level will be imposible to make.

 

I like the Z80 chip on the platform. In fact after looking at it for a while, that platform's not bad.

The rest is par, and there's no background.

 

Those walls look like a two year old's scribblings in MS Paint, not to mention the entire thing looks bland, almost like the 8-bit games. The only thing that I can say that I actually like is the Z80 chip on the platform. Try and make things look more lively, as well as fix up those pipe-things. If you can't come up with enough ideas to liven things up, then you may be in over your head, so to speak. In that case, it'd be good to do simpler things until you can get enough ideas for your art.

 

Would you like to come bunch babies with me?

 

If you're going to insult Hez, or anyone for that matter, you may wanna improve on your spelling/grammar.

 

Ehhh. No comment.

 

You know it all looks great exept for those pipe .. things. Those look terrible. I'm going to go kick puppies.


P.S. Please leave Hez alone, I've got his back, and he's Chuck Norris.

 

Your art seriously needs some work done on it. For starters, your circuitry is awful. The thickness and curviness of the wires is a real big turn off. I would suggest making them straight with 90 degree turns. Secondly, the platforms that Sonic is supposed to stand on look like it's all one color. With the way your colors look, it also makes it look too bright. Try using darker colors to help "flesh" things out. Or not, it's up to you.

 

Hello all. Just quick to say, Those metal strips on the floor & platforms need lots of straightening, But that's about the onsly problem I have with it. Oh, And those Tops of the platforms need thickening. Anyway, I'm not very hack experienced either, So if anyone would like to evaluate this(sorry 'bout the picture quality), And I don't want comments about how simple it all looks, That's the aim:

 

I think it's too much to expect Hez (or anyone else) to be "civilised" without proving you deserve it first. We don't shower people in compliments without them deserving it here - if it sucks, expect people to say so.

The lines on the floors are horrific, and the rest isn't much to look at. Additionally, your colour scheme makes my eyes burn.

Newbie, teach thyself. Hez is rarely wrong.

 

Erm... I think it should look a bit more like this: