[synchronizer]

LakeFeperd, on 15 July 2015 - 02:55 PM, said:

I realize that you told everyone not to mind the text, but would these suggestions be helpful at all? (Not necessarily typos.)

>How dare you(move exclamation point here to emphasize DARE)
>I have a degree "in" this. (maybe add "..." for a pause to imply that he's thinking about it?)
>I have a degree *in this.
>There's no way *I'm bad at it! (contraction instead of "There is" to be consistent with "I'm").

Text is not the priority of course. />

This post has been edited by synchronizer: 15 July 2015 - 07:30 PM

[Falk]

You guys are terrible lol

[synchronizer]

I actually want to help.

[LakeFeperd]

@synchronizer

Falk is talking about the typo no one was able to find yet.
"There is no way I'm bad a it"

Anyway, thanks for the suggestions though. As you guys can probably tell I'm not a fantastic writter. :P

[DigitalDuck]

No, we all saw that one too.

[S0LV0]

LakeFeperd, on 15 July 2015 - 02:55 PM, said:

Introducing: Fark (nicknamed by spark himself), He is Spark's replacement and rival.

So... Falk's Japanese counterpart? I assume he composes fan-soundtracks in his spare time.

[synchronizer]

LakeFeperd, on 15 July 2015 - 08:16 PM, said:

@synchronizer

Falk is talking about the typo no one was able to find yet.
"There is no way I'm bad a it"

Anyway, thanks for the suggestions though. As you guys can probably tell I'm not a fantastic writter. :P

Aw, I did correct it within my suggestions list haha.
Also, I think I see what you did there. [?]

Anyway, it's great that you're still working on this game.

This post has been edited by synchronizer: 15 July 2015 - 09:36 PM

[Chimera]

I don't know how good of a writter I am, but I think I'm an alright writer.

pls forgive me