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Shadix, on Dec 10 2008, 03:48 AM, said:
Don't know if this has been suggested, but you guys should either have one or two guys composing most of the tracks or require everyone to use the same effects and sounds in order to achieve stylistical and soundscape coherency.
I might contribute something after Christmas Chaos is out of the way:
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samples:
http://www.tindeck.c...-jinglemix4.mp3
Titlescreen esque fanfare
I really can't see that in a Sonic game
Really
http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/b/b...ludedshore2.mp3
Tropical Level. I managed to get quite a Hataya-esque style on this one, which was my goal haha.
Best of the tracks you shown in this post. Although I think that main instrument kills a bit the music. Switch to a trombone or a trumpet. Also I think it needs more instruments playing behind the main melody and have a bit more of a upbeat feel that Sonic music has
http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/l/l...titlescreen.mp3
Something I created for a minigame type game I was working on.
I really liked the back drums, we could use it in another song... The main melody however...
http://www.tindeck.c...jmpm-jazzy3.mp3
Menu Music
I liked this one! If it gets a little more speeded-up and more Sonic-ish it would make an awesome menu song
http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/k/k...berforest_3.mp3
Music for a level concept I have that isn't being used, a Petrified Forest level.
I feel that I'm repeating the same comments again and again, but although the main melody is great, however this song feels totally not Sonic
http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/o/o...ecandidate1.mp3
the framework for a cave track I never finished due to me never being satisfied with the soundscape I was creating for cave music.
Too calm, again, not upbeat and not Sonic-ish to me
http://www.tindeck.c...v-hardcore3.mp3
A metallic-type space level?
This one lacks a distintive main melody, and yeah, again, I can't imagine it in a Sonic game that's not a RPG or something more slow-paced
As I commented, your songs are good, but almost every single one of them do not feel nothing like a Sonic song, they're too calm and slow-paced. Sonic songs are more cheerful, upbeat, and they're rich in instrumentality. You almost nailed it on the Tropical one, but it lacks more cheerfulness and back instruments (see Palmtree Panic and Green Hill, for example)
I wish I could give deeper comments, but when I type in english I lose some time trying to translate some words and some of them I can't really type in English, and I don't feel so free and loose typing it, so I can't express myself the way I exactly wanted.
EDIT: See what I mean? I totally forgot to put commas in the text! Fixed it.
This post has been edited by Rave: 11 December 2008 - 09:00 AM