It's getting there SS. Some more feedback:
- Five fingers on the hand looks odd to me because it is too reminiscent of a human hand. Look again at ICEknight's frames and replicate the number of fingers on the hand depending on the frame.
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/2443/sq...lfinal2xly1.png
(Also look closely at the official art which shows him with four fingers - four suits the animals better for the frontal frame, whereas the side frame just three because the thumb is hidden. Look also at the spacing between each finger in IceKnights frame. The fingers shouldnt be too close together.
- The darker outline around the legs, below the arm pits and around the cheek is too thick.
- His stomach is too wide. Look very closely at the shape of the stomach in ICEknight's frame.
- The feet should be more pig-like, with little trotters.
You've added some more in-between shades, that's an improvement. The mouth and eyes are also improved. The color of his snout is better. Overall, the whole thing still needs more in-between shades, but it has definitely got better. Great effort! Thanks for your work
This post has been edited by Athelstone: 18 September 2008 - 11:56 AM